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Listless

.H.a.p.p.i.n.e.s.s.
is only inside of me
when you're there.

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Written July 10th, 2003

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  • RomanticHeart
    July 15, 2003
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    short sweet and to the point....but i'd have to say happyiness is only there when some people are there and when some people live me alone..lol...great write...
    one love, one voice, one pen
    blessed little one


  • faLsas EspeRanzas
    July 10, 2003
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    i...i was told...i...could listen to my radio

    Short. Good. I liked.
    Haha, Love you... -Jena