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Mad Desire....

Once before, your proximity startled me;
your voice baffled me.

Once before, your eyes scared me;
your hands I feared.

Once before, your touch was far fetched;
your company far afield.

If this is treason,
then let me die in saying this;

I love the sweet serenity of your voice,
I long for your closeness,
I need your presence.

That your eyes are fire,
burning, yet giving pleasure,
is not news.

That your touch kindles my heart
aglow with embers of live coal,
melting me.

That your voice
is my music

Your closeness
my craving.

Your touch
the one desire

Your face,
the one picture on the wall of my heart.

Yours is the love I desire

If not yours,
whose can I desire?

                    OGENE.

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    January 24
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    Thank you for your beautifully spoken entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • Cloudwalker
    January 22
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    its simple but wonderful. lovely write


  • Whenitefallz
    July 10, 2007

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    Absolutley splendid.. I have been long at rest in this forum, but I will sleep no more .. Inhaling here was indeed, my pleasure. . .


  • Ephiphany
    July 2, 2007
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    I agree with Sedasia...

    this is wonderful and I thank you so very much for taking time to participate.

    Ephiphany


  • Sedasia
    May 24, 2007
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    Beautiful

    This was a beautiful read! Very touching.

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