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[ One small spot of blue ]

One small spot of blue
In the sky of gray

A glint of hope
amidst despair
there's nothing you can say

The hope will fade
and blend with the destruction
but hope is fighting back

It has a chance
but will it last?
The everlasting question

Darkness overcomes us
The hope is lost

Somewhere inside
where nothing lives
or comes back out

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  • X-xKillLifex-X
    April 2, 2007

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    I love this.. the entire poem almost contradicts itself... this is great... amazing write!!I LOVE IT