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Goodnight

Goodnight cruel world.
Goodnight.
Goodnight to all that is un-true.
To all that is un-fair.

Goodnight to the abused children who hide their pain.
To those whom are neglected and thrown aside.
There will always be a better day for you.
For your tears will dry, and pain will diminish.

Thoughts of death will sail away on an open sea of lost thoughts.

Goodnight mother who looked the other way.
Who heard my cries.

Goodnight cruel world.
Goodnight.

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  • loserface623
    June 18, 2007
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    wow its deep i like the flow of it and ho it pulls you in

    loved it!!!


  • demonwithin
    March 31, 2007
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    guilty

    i liked it, as for form well, im the wrong guy to ask about that, my form is well formless lol