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These Are the Moments

These are the moments,
that live on forever more.
In my heart, in my soul;
They breathe within my core.

These are the moments,
As I lay down with you.
The look in your eyes
Cures every case of blues.

These are the moments,
As our lips together press.
My heart is alive,
As I'm engulfed by your caress.

These are the moments,
That make it worthwhile to live.
These are the moments;
The best life ever did give.

These are the moments.

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Option : Love. PENGUINS & STARS (rule thingy)

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  • HeavenScent4U
    November 19, 2007

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    You AP Mom, is my AP daughter, guess that makes me your grandmother in a sense you know her, mom just passed away recently, she hasn't been around much. she's told me so much about you, i thought i'd come by and read. so glad that i did. congratulations for the silver, it's very well deserved. you speak of love beautifully for one so young. love the talent i see here. thank you for sharing, be well and be blessed


  • Forlorn Dreams
    June 12, 2007

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    i really enjoyed reading this. it sounds like it could easily be a song. its very sweet, and extreamly well written. its leaving me speechless. Bravo! thankyou for entering and goodluck!
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