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Dark Lady

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Gypsy lady, cloaked in night- safe from the pain
of morning's light. Despite -- her window pane
she haunts, and wishes to escape. Light her
candles, read the cards- this queen prefers

to play it safe. Darkness deep absorbs her
power- mystical at midnight's hour- blur
between the light and dark, which
chariot denotes her heart? Witch-

-craft can't suppress her nature-
Comets light the night with danger- Pure
is the sun's intention- let go and accept-
----------resurrection.

Author notes

Huzzah
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Okay if you don't want to read my explaination stop now....
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What I am trying to say is that she is ultimately good but she is afraid to go out into the light because she has been hurt to many times by the universe. The comet and the sun are referring to two different charriots- the comet is the tarot card and the sun refers to helios the greek sun god who rides his charriot across the sky every day.

She needs to accept what the universe has handed her- move on and let go- and be reborn

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  • Venugopal gold member
    April 15, 2007
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    YES ONE HAS TO ACCEPT. A nice poem and nice explanation appended. This poem is blended with nature, the chariots, greek Gods and commets very well..Thank you for sharing. Your comments on my poem well received. i would try to rework pn my poem. Kindly read it again...Thank you very much


  • S A Adelmann
    April 2, 2007
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    Very nice work, Steph. I am so glad to see you back here.

    Scott


  • AutoPilate
    April 2, 2007

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    Outstanding!

    Brilliant writing, I love the rhythm of this very much. Best of luck in the contest.

    - Giovanni


  • FalconStarfyer
    April 1, 2007

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    ummmm damn! wow you are amazing my love!

    also! i havent seen you FOREVER!
    get your cute ass over here!


  • Desire gold member
    March 31, 2007
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    Wow-

    Powerful piece You have penned my Friend
    Love the explanation in Your Author's Comments~
    Hurt-Pain can make anyone hesitate for fear of it happening again~

    Thank You for sharing this with us~

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

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