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in the blind

not at all
can i feel you now
you know i cant
but still dont know how
its not fair for me
because i cant see
will you act as my eyes
i cant make it without


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  • Dygurl
    March 31, 2007

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    hmm i like short poems but i feel this one needs alittle more, like you haven't really opened up about the situation that you are writing about. it's a good start