catch these fallen tears
as they dry
one by one they leave my eyes
don't know where they come from
not sure how many more
they make me feel so trapped
God they make me sore
it's not enough to haunt me
they taunt and they tease
don't know what to do
not sure how to please
this pain it everlasting
it never goes away
maybe i'll get used to it
maybe someday
A contest entry
- Options & Reasons & Excuses by Naridill.
1400 points, ended April 10, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I like this poem, simple yet hard hitting. i can relate to it, I am sure there are many people who do. Its like being lost and hurt and not knowing how to get away from it or how to stop the hurt because you dont know why it is there. Well thats kinda what I got from it.
It is so simply beautifully written.
Thanks for entering and goodluck.
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you never get ovet it, you just have to learn and get beyond it. the write was filled with angst and orher emotion.
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