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breathe

my breathing has slowed down

almost to a stop

i feel it leaving me

don't let it stop

can you feel me

am i still alive

i see you now

and i don't want to die

touch my skin

don't you dare pull away

i'll never leave you

if you just say:

that you love me

with all of your heart

that you'll be with me

even when were apart

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  • cowabunga
    March 31, 2007
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    Wow! Great poem. Keep up the great writing