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the same tears

let it fall

the rain fell on me

i touched me

it reached me

soft

soft as me

soft as my tears

they are as rain

rain from my body

it soothes

my bodies rain soothed

no more

now the rain falls hard as hail

the hail persists

it has no mercy

as does not the tears

the are continuous

continuous with a harshness

it reaches me

not soft

not my tears

tears of loved ones do not soothe

they are not rain

they are tears

tears that speak

speak loud

speak clear

speak as though these words were you last

someday they will be

someday

too soon

not soon enough

you may think you know

only your tears know

trust them

trust and they will tell you

dont forget

never do

it will never change

tears never change

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