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Silence

God, I come to you looking
for peace
yet I don't feel you near
I come to you seeking answers
or hope or even just a call
to faith
yet I don't hear your words
As I sit- crying, seeking, yearning-
Silence

God, you call for me to be
broken
and I am
in so many pieces I don't
know how they fit together
Only you can remake me
and heal, but you choose not to
As I sit- begging, crying, empty-
Silence

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so i wrote this on november 12, and i just found it the other day, and decided i liked it, even tho it is short.

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  • SilverWolf
    June 20, 2008
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    I feel same... you have now inspired me to write a poem about this same subject!!!
    ok can i use the line

    yet I don't hear your words
    As I sit- crying, seeking, yearning-
    Silence

    ? i will be sure to credit it you for that line!!!!
    i wont if you dont want me too.. if its ok with u that wud make me happy!


  • SacredHope
    September 2, 2007
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    God will heal you in His own time. Have faith!