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The Moon

That night,
When it stopped,
The moon spoke to me,
He said, "Son don't worry, it'll be fine."

The next few months went by,
I had found someone else,
And then I lost it all, yet again,
The moon spoke,
He said, "Son don't worry, it'll be fine."

In three months I hadn't found anything,
Nobody to rely on for help,
I was left alone standing in the cold,
Then I saw you.

I had thought I lost it all,
That night the moons words made sense,
He had said,
"Son, don't worry, it'll be fine."

I found my way out,
I found you,
I found my reason to live,
I found you.

For you I have lived,
I have lived to see you everyday,
And everyday I do see you,
I feel I can live for a day longer.

The way this has turned out,
People think I'm crazy,
People think you're crazy,
But love is all that matters.

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I love you baby.

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  • Ignis Corpus
    June 6, 2007

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    i love it, its beautiful, beautifully layed out, good way to make the story into a poem, good job i loved it, good luck in meh contest