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More Like You

My heart is sad, but my soul is full,
of the love I have for You.

My knees are weak, and my eyes have just opened,
wider then the seas.

I am dizzy with the thought, You really exist.
I am spinning with the joy that cascades forth.

I can believe now, that a God lives, I can really ask You into my heart.
I can feel all you are to me now.

I am new in this place.
I don't know how to pray.

Lord, I feel I will be hurt, because this world is so crazy,
and our lives are so heavy.

Father, I am scared in this room, because their faces are so knowing,
all I want to do, my Jesus...

Is to love you my Savior, now, I may not do it so right,
but I want to know You, because I know there is a God.

I can promise You my life.
I say that I hear your voice.

I only need help, from their prying and mocking claws of despair.
I don't want to go back down to that place of worry and fear.
I only want to look up to You.

I want to follow You Lord, over those mountain tops.

I want to climb to the highest boughs,
of that tree just moment before, I was staring up against.

At the top of my lungs full, I begin to sing.
I never want to climb back down.

My life Lord, is so meaningless until, I see Your face.

My joys are only filled with air, until I sing Your name,
full of peace and full of that happiness, it's going all throughout me.

My beauty Lord, is no prettier then the soot in a chimney,
until I let You come close, so I can be that pretty afterglow.

My name is never known, until You give me Your own.

Author notes

Accepting God into my life was the best thing I could ever have done!
Life is so much more full of hope and happiness despite hard times.

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  • Rajaram
    April 7, 2007

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  • Heavenly Star
    April 4, 2007

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  • SoutherBelle
    April 1, 2007

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    Good Job

    This is a wonderful poem, and a wonderful story! Thanks for entering my contest, good job, and good luck!

  • Heavenly Star
    March 31, 2007
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    This is a great poem you wrote here dear poet. well done and good luck in the contest