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Romance



Being truly

in Love with someone, you adore

living for this moment & nothing more
I can't wait to see you this day

let's celebrate

an unforgettable

Valentine's...our way
Thinking what would I do
I feel your presence all thru
When I look up
I see your face
Just like the moon
Following me all over the place
Precious Moments
Delicate thoughts
Nothing about our Love is False
You will forever be Mine

not just today,

but everyday is

My Valentine



















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  • Mykeee
    February 3, 2008

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    Very lovely post. Congrats on the Trophy!! Valentine is such a special day that words of love is always appropriate ` mykeeee


  • Brazos silver member
    January 22, 2008

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    I loved the rhyme scheme, and I loved your thoughts. I don't know who's going to be with you on Valentine's Day, but whoever it is, they sure are lucky!

    Thanks so much for entering our contest.
    Brazos

  • Judith Chandler
    January 21, 2008

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    "I see your face/Just like the moon/Following me all over the place." That's the part that really struck me.

    Sounds like you are all set for a Happy Valentine's Day.


  • elemental angel
    January 21, 2008
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    Wonderful Valentine thoughts,
    Bravo


  • onesugar gold member
    January 21, 2008

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    Wonderful words of love here sis, so romantic.

    To be touched in such away that they make eveyday feel like valentines day is beautiful

    Good Luck

    ~sugar~


  • ennovy silver member
    January 20, 2008

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    Beautifully words of love and you done an excellent job on this piece.....I see Cupid all over this write....novy thanks for entering

    • AddictiveTRUTH
      January 21, 2008
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      Thank You

      very much.
      Great contest, love Valentine's Day!

      Ephiphany♥


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    January 20, 2008

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    Very lovely my friend and such
    a romantic background you have
    here. You really have a wonderful
    way with words. Great imagery as well.
    Only problem is, where's my glass???
    lol Good luck to you in this contest
    and keep it up! Thanks for sharing
    this one here!




    Jeremy0826


    • AddictiveTRUTH
      January 20, 2008
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      haahaa

      J...you know I got ur glass...here ya go
      thanks my friend, I appreciate your comment on this.
      ephiphany♥


  • rainy-july
    April 1, 2007

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    you write so lovely i love reading (although I could do without the pic, haha)Im such a romantic, and I love to love, and I simply adore your poetry its gorgeous, think about publishing it, Id pay money to buy it


    • AddictiveTRUTH
      April 12, 2007
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      Hey rainy-july...I am so sorry I 4got to come back and comment...or did I send you a PM? Well, just in case I will never get tired of saying Thank you...I really appreciate your comments.
      Ephiphany


  • Sarah957
    April 1, 2007

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    This is very nice. Love going right is very nice to read about. I like the last line "nothing bout our love is false"
    What a beautiful thought.
    Sarah

    • AddictiveTRUTH
      April 1, 2007
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      Thanks Sarah957. I really appreciate your comment on Romance.
      Ephiphany


  • WriteOrWrong597
    March 31, 2007
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    This was really sweet. Great write! Keep it up!


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    March 31, 2007
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    well, I must say..I agree with your first line, you do it quite well!

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