Brown broom,
Dirty dark blue dust pan
on its handle
leans
in the corner.
Messy mop
in a black bucket
beside
the sunflower curtains.
In a list
A contest entry
- Show, Don't Tell! by loveisthemoment.
330 points, ended April 11, 2007, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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ooo Very good. Thank you so much for entering and good luck!
Love always,
~GC
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