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Domesticity

Brown broom,
Dirty dark blue dust pan
on its handle
leans
in the corner.
Messy mop
in a black bucket
beside
the sunflower curtains.

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  • loveisthemoment
    April 10, 2007
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    ooo Very good. Thank you so much for entering and good luck!
    Love always,
    ~GC