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Yanking My Hair Out

I really hate to be seen to whinge,

But there's a few odd things that have begun to singe.

I think i best I get them off my chest,

write them down on paper to save me from exploding later!

 

I've had a few old rants here on AP,

on a few issues that are important to me.

But, sadly, there's a few more things that I've been thinking about,

that've left me pullin my hair out.

 

When did it become all about the celebrity?

There's so many more things important to me,

that I wish others could see.

It's now all about how rich one can be,

Everyone's like "Hey look at me"

A celeb starts a trend; everyone follows suit,

But in the end, its all so obsolute.

 

What about the starving and poor?

What, do they matter no more?

So many wars are still being fought,

yet the papers are full of the new car Beckham just bought.

 

Global Warming is taking place,

Still they race tofly into space,

Dump a little more space-waste.

We all know its happening, no-one will change,

Buying new 4x4's, and flying in planes.

We'll destroy our planet for the next generation,

Let them deal with that frustration.

 

The world seems full of broken dreams,

Whilst the streets ring out with victims screams.

Violence has become a daily occurence,

'Cos the world revolve's around the currency.

Crimes go unsolved, victims remain scared,

Kids attack strangers, just 'cos their dared.

 

So many things, I could go on,

But I don't wanttocomeon to strong.

So I'm going to leave it here,

I don't want to bore my peers!

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  • Celticpoet
    June 7, 2007

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    A very valid write!

    You are very observant sweetheart!...the only thing thats wrong with people and kids today is a lack of discipline...we are all as a nation becoming too soft and far too politically correct!...bring back corporal punishment I say!...lol!


  • The Poetic Angel
    April 1, 2007
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    well sed me sis great to read anuffer poem from you ..good luck in the contest xxx cheeky xxx