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Oh! My Neighbor...

My neighbor's Daughter
Oh my she turns my heart on
She makes that silly gesture
That puts my head on a song
And as I smile back at her
I see my neighbor pulling a fingure
I look up at the sky
and remember as said by Thy
Love you neighbor as thyself...

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  • honey bear
    April 24, 2007

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    this is a very good write sunny, i just loved it hee hee great work as usual, this one definately gave me a much needed smile


  • Melodies
    April 1, 2007

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    Ah, how sweet it is!

    All the quirky twists of fate and life as the world turns! Good for you... and this poem is lovely. Thank you for coming to our neighborly contest!