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Overdose

I'm tired of your voice,
It's like my cross
That I must bear amongst ridicule and hatred
I've tried so hard...
And I've fallen so far...
That I gave up on society
And everything you said.
*Just get away from me and let me
Let it Go.
Just go hide away with your
Life in Prose.
Let me feel the things that no one knows
And let me say this...
I need the drug so let me
Overdose.*
It's kinda hard to just
Sit here all alone.
It hurts so bad
As the skin wears down to bone
It burns so much...
To feel your touch..
*Just get away from me and let me
Let it Go.
Just go hide away with your
Life in Prose.
Let me feel the things that no one knows
And let me say this...
I need the drug so let me
Overdose.*
I need the drug,
I need the high
Let me go,
Let me fly...

Author notes

"I gave up on society and everything you've said."
-Dope
I didn't mean for it to be lyrics at first...But I started writing it and it jsut bloomed that way. Even my friends agree I should leave it this way. It doesn't break the rules.

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  • Lj-
    April 6, 2007
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    Very nice. I like the realistic quality to it.

    This poem doesn't break the rules, in the sense that you have included the lyrics, But it does break the rules in that it being more than twenty-five lines of text.


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