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Alyssa's Acrostic

         

     Alyssum lullabies, a musical bouquet  
     Lavender skies, show them the way
     Yarborough cotton and Tinkerbelle charms
     Swaddles Alyssa and keeps her from harms
     Sweetness from mommy with teddy bears ears
     A princess for daddy throughout all her years

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Lady Altheia gold member
    April 5, 2007

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    Hoodwinked

    Aww this is so beautiful. I really like the tinkerbell charms. What a beautiful lullaby and congrats on your gold.


  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    April 5, 2007

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    Hood-Wink!

    This is an absolute precious...completely and totally precious Acrostic poem, usually acrostics read quite disjointed, more like statements, but this has a most gentle and soothing flow to it...I can see how it beautifully deserved the gold trophy

    Your background compliments your poem so perfectly and I'm sure the resipient of this piece is over the moon, I know I would be

    You have been Hood-Winked by a member of The Poetic Bandits

    Love and smiles...
    ~Lilac

  • The Pole Star
    April 5, 2007

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    Hood Winked

    Well, very well done here...

    This write is passionate, in the sense that it is fully decorated with the jewels of both the poetic as well as graphic groups. This is an acrostic (shhh...Donna tell anyone that I find them difficult to write) and above it you have certain comparisons really well yielded here.

    So it's quite clear, you cheated here In the sense that you didn't give anyone else a scope at the gold and thus stole it from the contest

    Anyways, congrats for the gold,
    Take care,
    Northern Star. s

    'As a sweet little gift from Poetic Bandits'


    • FifthDove
      April 5, 2007
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      You are a precious gem
      Thank you

    • FifthDove
      April 5, 2007
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      And a very nice sweet little gift at that!!!
      Thank you very much dearDove*


  • queenie
    April 4, 2007

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    congrats, can't say this win is a surprise for asking you to write something of this nature comes so natural for you. all you had to do was write with your heart and the most beautiful sentiment was bound to show.you are an angel.


  • Florida Sunshine
    March 31, 2007
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    Congrats!

    Well done!


  • azure85 gold member
    March 31, 2007
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    Oh, this is so sweet! And the graphics are absolutely darling! Congrats on the gold!


  • ma belle
    March 31, 2007
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    I forgot to applaud this. I love how you compared her to the flower, Alyssum. Exquisite!


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    March 31, 2007

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    excellent~

    Oh I really like this...
    So enchanting...nice to meet you as well...
    I enteted the contest too...so good luck to us both...
    Do hope you drop by and read mine as well...
    Love this cute background....it took me 45 min at google to find an infant pic I really liked LOL
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


    • FifthDove
      March 31, 2007
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      Hey there Sis
      Long time no see, how have you been sweetie Thank you very much for the comment Cindy


  • Huntress silver member
    March 31, 2007

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    Very sweet poem, Good luck in the contest


  • ma belle
    March 31, 2007

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    How astounding. This will steal Daddy's heart, no doubt! Thank you for your lovely entry to the contest. Belle

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