Devastated by shattered dreams
Searing hatred burning
Deep within my eyes
Destroying peace around me
Finding the good
In all I see and
And corrupting their hope
Filling them with darkness
Destroying the light
Breaking everyone's will
Misery love's company
Misery will be all that remains
Crushing your heart
Demoralizing your soul
This is anger at it's finest
This is the after effect
Of promises broken, the effect
Of deteriorated love
A contest entry
- 26 letters, 26 enteries Number 2 by SensualWhispers.
600 points, ended April 13, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow, a lot said in the short poem of yours. I guess some kinds of love isn’t the best for hanging onto. I certainly felt emotion as I was reading, nice work
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Yes some loves can detroy the very core of you
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