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Open Display Of Anger

Devastated by shattered dreams
Searing hatred burning
Deep within my eyes
Destroying peace around me

Finding the good
In all I see and
And corrupting their hope
Filling them with darkness

Destroying the light
Breaking everyone's will
Misery love's company
Misery will be all that remains

Crushing your heart
Demoralizing your soul
This is anger at it's finest
This is the after effect
Of promises broken, the effect
Of deteriorated love

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  • Alilly silver member
    March 31, 2007

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    Wow, a lot said in the short poem of yours. I guess some kinds of love isn’t the best for hanging onto. I certainly felt emotion as I was reading, nice work