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fear



ephemeral vapors

      linger

      rest heavy
                  around my feet


            bind me with a spell
    of hesitation

                                always close-at-hand


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  • truembrace
    April 20, 2007

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    ugh - it's so nailbiting to always live as though we must think, that heavy thoughts surround us, and we always hesitate in that time (never quite living the way we should / deserve to)

    I'm so glad to see that you posted this. I'd stopped looking for writes from you with your muse in a sort of sabatical. It was a tremendous pleasure to realize this was here and to read something that brings your style of write to my mind - that it has been missed.

    Kimmie


  • Kendall Campbell
    April 4, 2007

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    The worst thing about fear is you can always count on it being nearby. I think you captured well the crippling affect it can have. 'ephemeral' was a perfect choice I thought.

    Not only was it well written but I also thought you formatted it a lot of purpose. The words almost float together on the page, enhancing the linger affect you describe. Glad to see yea post something again, take care


  • Alilly silver member
    March 30, 2007

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    I am not quite for sure what this poem is about but it is intriguing to say the least. I liked the line “bind me with a spell of hesitation” that line put a picture in my mind. Nice work Alilly