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To my love

To my love, my one and only.
To every moment we share,
from fighting over who loves who more
to laying in your strong arms.

Love me forever and always
Like you say you will
Please never leave me...
I need you in my life.

I want to see your smile,
I want to hear your voice,
I want to touch your warm skin
Everyday for the rest of my life.

And maybe the person who reads this
doesn't believe me, but it doesn't matter
these are my true feelings.
And I know you feel the same.

I feel your breath on me and I ache,
My heart sinks every time we walk away
I need to be with you.

I love you so much that without you...


I barely exist...

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  • crazykkjones
    April 2, 2007
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    itz really down to eart


  • Kieffer89
    March 31, 2007

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    Great

    Awesome job, i mean love can be such a powerful feeling, and it just gets to the point where you HAVE to write it down in words, and express them in a form like that...i like poems like that because it just kinda explains the little things you love about that person...although, i cant really do that nowadays, she broke up with me two days ago...right before our 4 months...figures, but still, i dont mind writing these kinds....once again, very nicely done.

    Sincerely
    -Kieffer