These tears, they hide behind these eyes.
To the back of my mind they go.
They hinde among the thoughts and threats,
The sadness and sorrow.
For if they ever do come out,
They shure as hell won't be for you.
You tried to keep me locked inside,
My thougths, my mind, myself.
You tried to keep me locked inside,
But guess what i got out.
Away from the lies, away from the pain.
I bloaked out the screams and shouts.
Now i sit here my your side.
Saying "guess hwat i got out!"
A contest entry
- Bury Me In Black #2 (dark poetry) by EvenStarsBreak--x.
450 points, ended April 2, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like that alot. it has a rythem to it. I feel that I can definitly relate to the message.
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nicely written
i love the wording of this poem! -
nicely penned a great way to say I am here and doing ok. I love the way the poem feels. Release tears when needed you feel better but that is a diffrent subject. Great poem
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This is a great write you wrote here dear poet, filled with such emotion. You should run the spell check though there is a few spelling errors, other then that this is a great write well done and good luck in the contest
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strong write
"You tried to keep me locked inside,
My thougths, my mind, myself.
You tried to keep me locked inside,
But guess what i got out.
Away from the lies, away from the pain."
Was my favorite part... good job and thanks for entering my contest.
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