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The Bus Ride Home (Part Two)

So, yeah, it's Friday again-
Why do I always write these
When it's about to be the weekend?
Who knows? Well not me;
I really don't know anything anyway.
OK, so actually I do,
But give me a break, okay?
There are some things that I know,
But it's not like I know evrything
In the universe.
Oh, come on, please stop crying,
You know it could be worse.
Why the hell are you
Crying, anyway? Is my poem that bad
That it makes you want to puke?
Oh shut up, you're so sad,
And an idiot, too.
Um, no, I mean you're great!
Really, I'm telling the truth!
Ugh, I friggen can't wait
To go home for the weekend,
Even though I have a project and homework,
And I'll probably procrastinate again.
Aw who gives a f***?!
No, I didn't just swear,
Don't look at me like that!
Besides, why do you care?
You're wearing a really ugly hat.

Author notes

This was a few weeks ago...

Am I weird or what?

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  • OnlyInMyDreams
    April 12, 2007
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    hahaa carrie, you always make me laugh! btu great poem about being mean to whoever is reading this, lol, i loved it! and yeah you do procrastinate a lot (no offense) but great job anyway, its seems to me, like you ahve a lot of fun wiriting these poems on the bus.

    XOXO and I Love Yas

    Kara

    P.S. HOPE YOU ARE ENJOYING BEING HOODWINKED BECAUSE I NOMINATED YOU< SO YOU SHOULD BE!!!!


  • LittleAnn
    April 12, 2007

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    Still hood-winking and laughing

    I enjoyed reading your second part of this, I hope you'll post more of these...
    I really like the randomness and the last line is priceless
    Different... but really nice!
    Annie


  • Lady-Pegasus
    April 12, 2007
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    Hey, leave my poor hat alone, it has had a hard life, lmao. I love the back and forth discussion you carry on here, it is quite humorous. Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e *

    YOU HAVE JUST BEEN HOODWINKED ; Courtesy of the Poetic Bandits


    • IridescentRose
      April 14, 2007
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      This is usually what happens when I'm bored. And the bus is one of the most boring times for me... XD Hehehe glad you liked it!