The last howler
Walking alone
While he screams
We hide under his shadow
He smells like death
And we are bait for him
He turns the sky gray
He makes the stars fade
Destroys our hopes
He crushes our bones
As he kills us all
We rot under his claws
The black wolf is alive
Given birth by torture
Fury burns in his eyes
Pains beats in his heart
No web’s going to stop him
He’s been sent to earth
To end our fantasies
To make us shiver in cold
Like a flame he destroys
Burning everything on his path
And while we cry and pray
God wont make him go
He’s here to stay
He’s here to fade us away
A contest entry
- Dark and Fantasy Options by Shade Aurelia.
650 points, ended April 20, 2007, 7 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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mmm.. I guess mankind should be prepared to be annihilated by this creature. Very nice dark poem
I really liked it.. Good job! I like your ideas and yor choice of words.
Keep on writing, and good luck in the contest.
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thank you very very much.. i really preciate this comments
and maybe mankind is already dealing with this beast..
i belive monsters can take many forms..
any wonder why our world is ending through the greed of people?
this hunger for money and power, is worse than the wolf
think about it, it took me a while to realize so =]
thanks again for the comment.!
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ooh, I like this! New twist on the old myth. Do you know the old myth of Fenrir? lol Anyways, good write and good luck.
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I dont know much about it.. all i know is a few things, but i could feel the electricity of it.. like a pagan mith.. it was something cool to write about
thanks for the comment, i dont think i'll win, but writting is always great to me.
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I didn't notice this before, but read rule 5 again, please. lol
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eemm.. i did put option E and the phrase.. :S
what did i miss..?
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