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This is very artistically-done. Very creative indeed. I enjoyed reading this. I shall read more of you.
Well done
Wayne Leon
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wow
I love the way you set this up. it makes you think, but at the same time it has such a simple message that you dont really need that much tought process... I dont know... I just love it!
keep writing, I love your work.
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i don't understand this poem at all....
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it can't make sense because of the holes in my brain. but that's the point anyway. =)
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This is ok, it was kind of hard to follow.
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bravo
It makes me sad too. But in a good way of course. I love the formatting, and the last line is especially strong.
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love you abs
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