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Who's Who?

I have seen so many faces,
I cannot remember one of them, not one
I want to, but I just can't
can't tell which friend's the one who deserves to be left in the gutter
I just can't make the right choice over anything
I can't tell who the playas are,
or who the sweet, truthfull guy is
I can't tell what you see me as
can't decide to take my love life by storm
or to just wait around for in to change
what should I do, should I even try
I can only barely even pick out my outfits every morning
I just cannot do it on my own, anymore,
but I do know one thing for sure
I want you in my life.





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  • C.c
    April 13, 2007

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    this is a really good poem. i liked it a lot. it reminds me of the guy i like but he has a gf. back to the poem i really liked., so i'm gonna give u three clappy dudes.


  • NooNiThEWitcH
    March 30, 2007

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    This is very nice.. well many people are indecisive but at least you have a goal.. you are going to keep that guy in your life .. and if I can I'll help you out
    When you said you can't pick your outfits in the morning you reminded me of my sister who can NEVER pick her outfits and when I or my mum or anyone picks out something for her she doesn't like it..

    I like this poem.. Keep on writing, Meri
    Nooni