My neighbors suck
There is no doubt they irritate
My neighbors suck
The thought of them makes me up chuck
Seek a way my irk to abate
Their influence eradicate
My neighbors suck.
In a list
A contest entry
- ~~ MY NEIGHBORS ~~ by Melodies.
450 points, ended April 2, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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As much as I am illuminated by the comical side, I also can see a ton of a heavy burden that weighs intensely on the protagonist of this poetic piece.
-Keep the ink flowing!
-Good luck in the contest!
-Dave -
OH MY GOSH...
We have the same neighbors!
It is the same sucky people! 
We need to join up and trick them into wanting to move. 
VERY funny poem! I like the way you vented so poetic-like! 
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LOL Oh my gosh, I am laughing.......................
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