You make me smile
You make me laugh
You put me on your shoulders
And sit me on your lap
You're always there for me
Whenever I need you
When I'm sad
You always know what to do
So I'll tell you this
And I'll tell you true
I'll always
Always love you.
Please tell me what you think
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Hey, haven't seen you up and about this site too often lately. Hope all is okay with you. Hope you had a good Christmas and have a good new year too. Liked this poem and the sentiments you have expressed here/ Easy to read and understand. Good to have friends like this.
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Very nice friendship poem.
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This is very heartfelt and wonderful in that alone. Its very concise which is good quality and widely universal as we all have someone that is just that special to us. Thanks for sharing this piece. (PS:I'm commenting so arbitrarily, because a while back you commented on a bunch of my pieces, very nicely too, and I don't remember if I returned the favor.) (PSS: I'm adding to my ap family, so if you need another member contact me via ap messaging system so we can figure something out.) Good job on the piece!!
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very sweet and to the point! Cherish this friend and the few friends like them! because ina world full of idiots these kind of friends will laugh with you in their face!!!
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Great
Sounds like you have special bond between the two of you it is always great to have a close friend in the world today..... kepp up with the good work
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Yes we do actually.
Ray is my best-friend. He's great. And You were right you are smexi. 
Thanks for the comment.
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This is a very sweet write! Almost makes me want to get a dog! I have a cat and she is sometimes phiniky! (did I spell that right?) Oh well, still a very sweet piece!
K
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this is the same with my friends. there is always one friend that tries to makes you happy when you are sad. i like this poem.
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i like it
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Excellant
A very fine write and tribute to friendship. Very well written indeed. -
this is a very lovely dedication to a much cared for friend and it is nice to see that you are not ashamed to declare your love for him as some people are.great work
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good
this is the same with my friends. there is always one friend that tries to makes you happy when you are sad. i like this poem.
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cute.
cute.
makes me think of me and my friends.
"When I'm sad
You always know what to do"
thats true =]
even if thye dont try they can make you smile and make you happy. i love my friends..thanks for this..its great.
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