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cry

why do i cry you once asked
because i dont know how to cope with this shit
why do i run from what i fear
because im afraid of who i am
why do i hide
behind a mask
because i dont know what i feel
so why do i cry once again
because you hurt me
when you left that day
when you ran out the door in the rain
and never turned back to see my face
i cry because ill never see you again
i cry because tears are all i am

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  • Naridill gold member
    March 31, 2007

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    I loved the last line here, very beautiful, very true. I love the way you composed this sad poem. I can relate to it very well. I love the simplicity that makes people beable to relate.

    Thanks for entering and goodluck.