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Drop of despair

Rain trinkled down your soft pink cheeks.
Or was it a tear?
Rain or tear
it was clear
that it was a drop of despair.

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  • I-Am-Custard
    March 31, 2007

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    Short but sweet, I like it.
    'Soft pink cheeks' was a bit cliched and needs some work, but other than that I loved this.