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*~G.I.L.I.T.T.E.R~*

G.l.i.t.t.e.r Obsessions living on
C
  O
    C
      A
          I
            N
              E
Mutilation is her beauty ~mark~
A princess so pretty in
P
  I
    N
      K
Sparkles in morphine d.r.e.a.m.s
Hiding her imperfections
A diamond doll on
E
  C
    S
    T
      A
          S
            Y
Living in a coma of sex and S.U.I.C.I.D.E
Violated on a
A
  L
      T
        A
          R
Of pills and blood
Destined to drown in a pool of
G.I.L.L.I.T.E.R lies.

Author notes

Word Bank 17 words in all.

Okay this is only my second Dirty Pretty poem ever I am a newbie to the style. It is also my first try at imcoprating some of the typing style to of it. I hope that you like it.

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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    April 27, 2007

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    WOW

    This is one pretty dirty write my friend and I just love the style you typed it in...must tell me how you do that sometime good-luck on contestCool


  • anima bella
    April 2, 2007
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    i LOVE this.


  • requiempoet gold member
    March 30, 2007
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    I haven't read this yet but...you spelled " glitter " wrong...in the title.