There is no line
between love and hate
a heart never shines
and that will be our fate
If there is a line here
why does it feel the same
why can't we hold anyone dear
why does it all end in shame
A loved one hurts you
the one you loved
and now only your hate is true
and all you do is shove
Shove everyone out of your life
and become the one thing you never wanted to be
because you will never be anyones wife
and hate is all you see
So there is no line
nothing keeping them apart
and love will never be fine
because hate will be there at the start
Hate waits for the right time
to creep into your love
it wait for its time to shine
and your realize that love doesn't come from above
The feelings are one
and no one knows
that there is no battle to be won
and no feelings to show
A contest entry
- Thin Line.... by Faerie.Princess.
550 points, ended April 16, 2007, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Intensity that lives within a spectrum...we've just chosen the names for the extreme ends. Well-said.
Blue
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really good
Reads really well & v thought provoking. Its about such a serious matter, but u managed to not make it dark and miserable, which I think is fab. Espcially like the lines: There is no line between love and hate & The feelings are one. Congrats on being an Honorable winner! xoxo
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great
very good peice, there are a couple places that could use some tighting up but its good the way it is. Keep it up. Hugz*Dave
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i love this poem and the idea that there isnt a thin line they are one emotion. which is true though i had never thought of it like that. i love the line hate waits for the right time to creep into your love...theres so much honesty in that one line. great poem. this an amazing and thought provoking piece of poetry. good luck in the contest and keep writing
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