Out of the blue, the silence broken,
I hear your voice sweetly say hello.
Losing my breath, sweet words spoken,
warm feelings inside starting to grow.
It's been so long since I felt your touch,
warm sweet kisses making me quiver.
This moment, I longed for so much.
hands slide down, making me shiver.
Hold each other in frenzied delight,
satisfying the pleasures we seek.
Losing control in the heat of night,
driving me crazy, making me weak
Pressed against me, make me squeal,
as you gently unfold. my sweetness.
Sensual is how you make me feel,
put your sweet lips upon my wetness.
See the fire in my emerald eyes,
left breathless, by your words unspoken.
Hear how you please me, amid my sighs,
out of the blue, the silence broken.
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I love this poem
i think this poem is really good and i think you should keep it up!!!
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Okay, there is nothing left to imagine....your words establish a rhythmic intention, a suspense.....to an apical moment. yeah? Good job. I don't know about the line....13 "...make me squeal," That line left me going ...squeal? I had to refocus myself for imagery jumped into play. Well maybe people do that right? lol. Either way, the intention, erotic and pointed.
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oh this was sexy
and warm
great job
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this is a most beautiful write...physically, emotionally, spiritually. it touches all the senses in some aspect. you did a fantastic job with this. keep writing sister. God bless you always
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nice, i have to agree with the rest of the people that have said great things about this great write, I enjoyed it very much and thought it was well written.
loved the last stanza, great work
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Beautiful
Very beautifully penned all round and a very much enjoyable poem that has everything that makes the readers mind go nuts but then again the words cascade down so beautifully that makes the poem flow with such a great beauty that is rare to see. keep up the good work and take care. Sincerely, Paul
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I love it.. very gentle and passionate..like a true love story...emphaiszing on the weaknesses about losing control. a wonderful allegory of love
Kepp your good job. or that's why you on top. but keep on
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goos Good GOOD
This was a great poem....I felt some of these versed emotions on this morning. "Hold on to each other in frenzied delight", WOW! Better said by you...than I. -
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Thank you for stopping by and reading. I so appreciate it. Take care, Sandy
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I do not think I'm at a place yet where I can fully appreciate this, but it is well written and I think you did a fantastic job on imagery. I agree with most of the previous posts, you did convey something sensual without making it vulgar or simply physical. I'm glad that you incorporated some of the emotional side and didn't make it...unable to be read by children/to adult, and coming from me that means a lot! It was most definately out of the blue. Good job!
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WoooooooooooooooooooooW............................very touching... i agree with mcheadle
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Thank you for stopping by and reading. Take care, Sandy
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VERY TOUCHING
LIFE HAS TOUCHED YOUR SOUL -
VERY TOUCHING TO ONES HEART
LIFE HAS TOUCHED YOUR SOUL -
VERY TOUCHING TO THE HEART.
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For the Young
A poem for the passions of youth, not old guys like me who have learned better. Oh well. Keep on truckin' young lady. May you have a passion for life and a life full of passion.
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"out of the blue"
This is a great poem about sex. Yup, I agree with tiffydawn08, it isn't vulgar, but very much beutiful.
I was not expecting to read such a poem when I clicked on it...very much "out of the blue"
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rele good >^.^<
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Beautiful
I love this poem and the sensuality you are able to incorporate with out it being vulgar...good write
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Sandy,
Not use to reading such sensual work from you. This is poignant. Soft, alluring, and very tastefully written. Beautiful!
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Lovely Comment
Thank you Renee. Bless you, Sandy
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VERY SENSUAL. LOVED THE WAY YOU STARTED THIS POEM. "Out of the blue, the silence was broken, I hear your voice sweetly say hello. Losing my breath, sweet words spoken, warm feelings inside start to glow." THE LOVE AND EXCITEMENT OF YOUR LOVERS APPEARANCE....MADE ME SIGH. BEAUTIFUL WRITING.
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Gentle (VERY gentle!) erotica here. Which is very difficult to do. One point i would make is that "squealing" is not very erotic - perhaps a different slightly more sensual verb might have been better?
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Sensual
Another great write Sandy.
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Lovely Comment
Thank you Colin, Your comments always bring a big smuile.
Take care, Sandy
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Awe, this is so sweet and tender. A very romantic write!!
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Nice Comment
Thank you for the nice comment and the applauses. You take care, Sandy
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wow...a romantic poem full of love feelings.
Wish you the best.
Shahrzad
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Lovely Comment
Thank you my sweet niece. Spring is here, a time when our hearts turn to love. Your comment was so lovely. You take care,
Love you,
Blessings to you,
Sandy
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WOW!!
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Good Morning Melba, Thank you for the lovely comment. So glad you enjoyed it. You take care, Sandy
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sensual
i'm not sure if the love is what is making the person weak. the eyes and the touch adds to the sensualness of the poem. the blue and the emerald are the colors found in water. maybe they represent the metaphor of drowning into the waters of the lover or perhaps something phaelic or the spilling of juices- as in juicy secrets.
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Thank you for the lovely comment. It is most appreciated. You take care, Sandy
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Fantastic!
You killed it...It is sweet, sensual, sexual..Catchy title and a vivid, memorable end-line. Really love the "fire in my emerald eyes".. Well-done. All the best, Mat
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Great Comment
Hello Mat, Thank you for the wonderful comment. I so apprecaiate it. You take care,
Sandy
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This was HOT~
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Nice Comment
Thank you Malicai fot the nice comment. Take care, Sandy
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Wow is right. What a sesnual piece you have written and it was done so well and expressed so lovingly. Your metaphors were fresh and original.
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Wonderful Comment
Hello Lady Altheia, Your comment was great and it was most appreciated. Thank you a bunch. Take care, Sandy
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WOW
That was...wow...a different expression of love then I've come to expect in your poetry. A pleasure to read, to be sure. Thank you for sharing.
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Wonderful Comment!!!
Hi, I am glad you enjoyed my friend. It was fun to write. It seemed to just pop into my head. 
Thank you for the applauses. You take care. Sandy
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Magnificent As Usual!
Again sis,your genteel way of expressing love,is all your own! Embraces,affection,intimacy is all at your level,sweet,gentle.Your reactions your own.I like your style of romance..Very feminine..Yet not passive! Thank you for another example of romance that gives dignity to we women,who long for affection but demonstrate it in your way!
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Thank you Rosemary
Hello sis, I hope all is well and you are enjoying this nice spring weekend. Your comment was so lovely and thoughtful. Many Blessings to you, you are truly an angel.
Take care my friend,
Sandy
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wow
Left me speechless as well as breathless. WOW! That's all I can say.
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Wonderful Comment
Hello Annie, Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. I so appreciate it. You take care and have a great weekend. Sandy
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