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high school

it changes you
like a living thing
no one escapes its trap

A contest entry

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  • bethan-gaze
    April 8, 2007
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    A lovely, succinct poem ... congrats on the bronze trophy!


  • travis34dietC
    April 8, 2007

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    i can't relate because i haven't gone to high schoool yet but i really liked the way you wrote this. i've also heard about how much people change in high school. very powerful poem!
    thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Angierie
    April 1, 2007

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    Ok.. definatly know how you feel with this one.
    However you've got a few years to go and I'm sure it will get better.. then you won't want to leave..lol
    Atleast that's where I am right now.

    Great write!

    Angie


  • CatyBrie.
    March 30, 2007
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    wow


  • Naridill gold member
    March 30, 2007
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    This was quite weird to read and very well done, I feel you did a good job on a small poem, well done and good luck in the contest you entered.

    p.s I feel many people will be able to relate to this, well done.

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