it changes you
like a living thing
no one escapes its trap
A contest entry
- 3 line poems about your First Day Of High School by travis34dietC.
300 points, ended April 8, 2007, 23 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A lovely, succinct poem ... congrats on the bronze trophy!
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i can't relate because i haven't gone to high schoool yet but i really liked the way you wrote this. i've also heard about how much people change in high school. very powerful poem!
thanks for entering and good luck! -
Ok.. definatly know how you feel with this one.
However you've got a few years to go and I'm sure it will get better.. then you won't want to leave..lol
Atleast that's where I am right now.
Great write!
Angie
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wow
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This was quite weird to read and very well done, I feel you did a good job on a small poem, well done and good luck in the contest you entered.
p.s I feel many people will be able to relate to this, well done.
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