With you...
I will awake each day
A smile playing soft
Across my waiting mouth
Breath catchin’ hard in anticipation
Of your open gaze
Aflame with love
And consuming lust.
With you...
I will spend my days
Caught,
Entwined in joy wrapped
Tight like your fingers
Woven through mine
Your spirit meshed
Inside my own
Three souls recognized
Only as one.
With you...
I will lie down by night
And dream a dream
All my own, forever realized
In sun and shadow
Through all life’s joys and pains
One to face the sorrow,
One to savor gladness.
With you...
I will be me.
Author notes
I actually have two favorites for basically the same reason they both help me to keep hope alive, and to believe that one day I can add a dedication for someone deserving of my heart....
UPDATE: FINALLY I HAVE FOUND MY HEARTS DESIRES
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A contest entry
- It's all about love by Sound of Madness.
625 points, ended July 12, 2008, 76 entries
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Comments
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This is very beautifully written. I could feel the love as I read this. I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest
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It just sounds awkward to me. It's a nice write. Good luck in my contest.
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Sweet and powerful write here. It is erotic but subtly so, and I like that. My favorite lines are:
Entwined in joy wrapped
Tight like your fingers
Woven through mine
Your spirit meshed
Inside my own
I really like that image. It really made the poem for me. This was really good, and good luck in the contests you've entered. -
This is really sweet. Thanks for entering my contest, and I wish you much luck.
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