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The Night Air

Tossing, turning, cold sweat
turns to tears upon silk sheets.
Whispering softly, the moon's breath
chills raspy breath.

Warm hearts beat for
music in rhapsody while winter's frost

freezes those who long for

someone else to hold.

 

Toils in loneliness,

cried through the Smokey haze

tearing yourself apart for pasts

better left forgotten.



 

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  • WorstNinjaEver
    March 31, 2007

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    That was very well done. Each stanza was consistently shaped. Great job. Keep penning always.

    -Chance