A wind rustles through the trees.
The flowers sway in rhythm.
Butterflies with their velvety wings,
start frolicing from flower to flower.
The sky then shades a few darker.
Darker
Darker still
It darkens more till
It's completly dark.
Fireflies display their array of yellow light.
One pops up
Then two
Then fifteen!
I look up at the sky.
A white full moon shows.
Enriched by the diamonds in the sky
A contest entry
- Prewrite " SPECIAL" by wingsofgold25.
450 points, ended May 17, 2007, 123 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very well written...good luck in the contest!
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A very well written piece Good Luck inthe Contest
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How lovely the poem you saved from the 8th grade! A beautiful milestone for you. Keep all your poems from year to year. It is wonderful to see your growth blossom before your eyes. You were so thoughtful to visit my poem--thank you. My best,
Belle
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Hi... I just visited your author page after receiving your wonderful comments on my writes.
From your name, you seem to be an Indian.
This is a sweet poem.
Wonderful imagery.
Nicely done.
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