Click- spark...
In out Breathe
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Lungs caving down, collapsing inward
Its comming now;
Creeping through my viens
*flick*
The earth slows
Time hides away in shallow minds
*flick*
Sliding through fog-shrouded air
The arms have stopped
And the cannon-ball thoughts slow
The lazy breeze inhaled
All is quiet now,
Calm, still...
*flick*
Colours and shape now defined,
The brain a tranquil sea of placid nothing
My eyes open...
(Oh dear, leaving so soon?)
*flick*
Breathe
----hold----
Another day dawns
The sun dancing behind this
The last swirls
Of the first of the day
Author notes
I know it sucks. But this is my obsession....
A contest entry
- ♥With her mouth sewn shut...her eyes began to scream...♥ by poetformerlyknownas.
370 points, ended April 7, 2007, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Interesting song. Keep it up !
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DEEEEEEEEEUUUUUUUUUUUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!! i love you. This is a great poem...and I didn't know that it was you I just saw that you had more stuff to read!
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Lol yeah I knew that was going to happen...
Oh well, I'm glad you liked it, its not my usual style, and one line in particular is pissing me off... but, all that shall be fixed hopefully....
<3
Muriel
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