Peace
Tranquility
and
Eloquence
In the very essence
Of my soul
Tears
Laughter
and
Song
Course through memory
Breathing life
Water
Earth
and
Air
In perfect harmony
World tied together
Author notes
This is about an oriental garden
A contest entry
- Japanese/Oriental Gardens. by Poetic Aphrodite.
400 points, ended March 31, 2007, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Contest # 4 VIRTUAL GARDENS (prewrites okay in this one) by .
500 points, ended April 26, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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When things in our lives make a wrong turn there is something calming and familiar about walking through a garden
Lovely poem good luck in the contest
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Yes, this is exactly how an Oriental garden would make me feel as well. Nicely penned and you seem to have the right words weaved in here.
Charishma
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Thankyou for your beautiful entry, Bella
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This was lovely. It was tranquil to read. Very well-written, and nice and simple too. Good job.
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