Have you ever felt the bittersweet moment
After the end of a novel you cherished,
A song that touched your soul,
A film that moved you to tears?
All of your emotions are a paradox
Hopeful in your hopelessness
And mournful of your bliss
Heartbreak in many confusing words
Once you have wept for the sorrow of joy
Only then will you understand
Every time I look at your face
This is the bittersweet longing I feel for you
Author notes
Option 1.
And since I know he'll never see this, I dedicate this poem to Chris Hull, my partial inspiration to this work.
A contest entry
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This is so cute. ^_^ It's also sad... It's bittersweet just like the title and what it describes. I enjoyed it a lot. Thank you for your entry. Good luck. :]
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Very pretty. I love the first stanza. Great write. Thanks for entering and good luck in my contest.
~Raine~
**I'd give applause but I used it all already...sorry.
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Nice job, but not quite what I'm looking for so I'm afraid I will have to remove it. Sorry. I do hope you enter my next contest though.
Love always,
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great poem, thanks for entering
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A Beautiful Write.
"All of your emotions are a paradox
Hopeful in your hopelessness
And mournful of your bliss
Heartbreak in many confusing words"
I can relate to that, it's so full of emotion. This poem shows great talent. Thank you for entering my contest and Good Luck! -
I can so feel the pain in these written words. Deeply penetrating they are. Very good write.
Thank you for entering and good luck
Storm -
great job
This is a great poem. It's awesome.
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