Kisses laughs smiles flawed perfection.
Laying together on prisoners of war nights.
Rebels in a world of thorns.
I melt into you...I don’t exist alone.
I hide my eyes in warmth.
I don’t have to listen.
I don’t have to see the fallen morality soldiers around us.
I hold onto you tighter..... I don’t dare venture into a world so cold.
You say I’m an angel.
Well you’re the one guarding me.
You wrap me in a blanket.
I breathe in your love
A contest entry
- love poems (13yrs-18yrs) by Shacadia Shay.
390 points, ended May 3, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is nice & easy to read. its also a great simple poem & you can feel emotions. please let me know your age by messaging me. good luck in your love life & in my contest.
--blessed be--
dark princess vampire -
Wow.. I really like this. The whole guardian and angel thing is like what my boyfriend and I say. I like the imagery you included... Not too much to overpower the piece and just enough to let the readers mind wonder. Good luck in the contest!!
-Amanda
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wow
thats great i like it alot means alot to me i know how it feels
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