In a room full of lights,
all is dark,
darkness is all I know.
The dark light of us all.
I see what they dream of,
what they plan, scheme.
And all their sinister beings,
Are mine to flush out of society.
I enter not into this place,
for to lure is my game.
Lure them to my dark palace,
My dark palace of death.
My nature is that of evil,
of life I know nothing,
of death...
I know all.
Author notes
I'm very low on inspiration, and I give all credit to the little bit of inspiration I have, which I was given by H.I.M.'s "Dark Light". I know the poem doesn't really follow the song or anything, but its a dark write all the same. I think I have more inspiration to go and write some more new dark stories and dark poetry. THats what I'm best at...vampire stuff, ya know waht I mean. Kind of like my "La Chasseresse de la Nuit" series I'm working on. granted, they are only bits and pieces, but I'm going to expand outward to make it longer, and hopefully be able to publish them one day. anyways, about this poem, I have nothing to say.
A contest entry
- Bury Me In Black #2 (dark poetry) by EvenStarsBreak--x.
450 points, ended April 2, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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WoW
I like this one. Very nicely written....keep it up
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Captivating
I see that even in your lack of muse, you shed out an elegant spark like this.
Keep it up my friend, you'll sure get it done.
This was a nice entery, good luck in the contest.
Be well,
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"My nature is that of evil,
of life I know nothing,
of death...
I know all."
I found it hard to choose a favorite part in this poem, but in the end i chose this one, because it striked me the most. Good job and thanks for entering my contest. -
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Thank you for the very nice comment. You are very welcome, and thank you for holding the contest. I can't wait to read more of the other entries.
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