My psychotic obsession with pain
allowed me entrance into the
psychedelic world of pill popping.
A requiem for madness in the
dimensions of eternal unrest.
Incubus and Succubus are the
master and mistress of ceremony.
Nympholeptic spirits that chant
lust crazed melodies of insanity.
As they violate my flesh with
Kama sutra techniques of love.
I wrestle in a realm of suicidal depression.
Pushed over the edge by the demented
Mutilation of stillborn babies
by sexy blow up dolls.
As the infamous whore Jezebel
entertains the Princess of darkness
on the altar of abominations.
Dancing in blood colored lingerie
glittering with diamonds and rubies
that sparkles like the stars.
Her beauty beguiles me as I gaze in wonder,
while suspended in a drug induced coma.
My mind inundated with cocaine lithium
morphine Alcohol and Ecstasy.
During this mass of Imperfection
the princess of darkness slit's
Jezebels throat with the sacred
knife of lost souls.
Instant panic occurs as I bleed internally
scratching my head in total disbelief.
This classic horror story continues
as she demons enter my nightmare
looking Pretty in pink.
They surround the sacrificial altar with grace.
As they chant in reverent salutation.
Raising their goblets to the royal diadem of evil.
Hoping to seize power and everlasting life
in the abyss of hell.
After escaping this schizophrenic journey,
my faith in religion revived.
Alluring me back into the arms
of a forgiving God.
Amen!
Author notes
My penname is darell
A contest entry
- Imagination by burdened.
600 points, ended April 30, 2007, 29 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congrtas! Ya never cease to amaze me with your words....some imagination
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This is a great piece, full of wonder, and where the next line and stanza was going to take me through your world. An interestin and captivating write.Thanks for your entry and good luck. Take care XxX
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You painted some interesting imagery. So how was hell? It sounds trippy. You either had a nightmare or you were on some good stuff. It had a psychodelic feel to it. Until I read the end, I wondered if the speaker was a satanist.
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Oh my ! The imagery in this scared the crud out of me .. Terror dripped from this piece.. at least for me. ( and probably everyone else ). Talk about psychotic.. no matter what induced it. Well written for sure. Good luck in the contest.. This piece would definitely fit into fright night. d
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Wow, um, very good, yet vaguely disturbing imagery. It is very well written.
I have to admitt the beginning freaked me out a bit, but I got used to it fast and enjoyed it.
Random fact: Did you know the name Jezebel actually means virginal? Sorry. Way off topic.
Anyway, I laughed at the end. It was very abrupt and...funny. Should it be? Was that the effect you were going for, or am I just a little (or more) nuts?
Overall, Well done. Thanks for sharing! -
This classic horror story continues
as she demons enter my nightmare
looking Pretty in pink.
They surround the sacrificial altar with grace.
As they chant in reverent salutation.
Raising their goblets to the royal diadem of evil.
Hoping to seize power and everlasting life
in the abyss of hell.
After escaping this schizophrenic journey,
my faith in religion revived.
Alluring me back into the arms
of a forgiving God.
Amen!
Omg. I love you. You did SUCH a wonderful job. I thought this was a really hard contest that I was asking you guys to do but this is a FABULOUS poem!!!! Thank you Thank you Thank you!!! -
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Though...it needs to be in Dirty pretty form!!! I was so wowed by your entry that I didn't even notice! if You don't know what dirty pretty is go back to the contest it has a few links!!!
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An odyssey into madness indeed!... I very much enjoyed the fluctuation of the word choice that you used quite flawlessly, impressive indeed. The title itself reminded me a bit of H.P. Lovecraft, and expected the write to be somewhat resembling his closely, but in that, I was quite wrong. Well done.
Ta-ta,
G.
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