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Crazy

His angry eyes

Scare the blood out of my heart

He's crazy because

He thinks I'm tearing them apart



But little does he know

He's the one who's

Ripping as he goes


He runs and yells

He's out of his mind

He's got us scared

All of the time


He looks me in the eyes

And screams in my face

He scared me to death

But you'll never find a trace


I've got to stay strong

To keep him away

I've got to be tough

Or he'll ruin our day


He needs help

But he doesn't let anyone know

We're the only ones there

When he lets his true self show


His eyes red as

Marbles of hatred

Stare right into me

On the inside I'm shaking

But on the outside I'm carefree


He's go to realize

He can't do this anymore

He's go see what he's doing

And show him self the door


This is crazy

No one needs a guy like him

With every moment she spends with him

Her futures looking grim


There's no justice in hitting a girl

There's no justice in raping

God, If she's pregnant

He's mine for the taking..





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  • XXBrunettexBarbieXX
    April 24, 2007
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    This seems to be in the 3rd person point of view perhaps to a friend or family member? and if so I can relate to this with alot of people who take the abuse...I myself took it...and I can understand your wanting to save that person...great work...keep writting your very talented

    ~Chrissy~


  • silencethequestion
    April 10, 2007
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    very well written. I really like this poem. thanks for entering the contest and good luck.


  • XCrUeL iNtEnTiOnSX
    April 10, 2007
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    good write

    thanks for entering my contests good luck