His angry eyes
Scare the blood out of my heart
He's crazy because
He thinks I'm tearing them apart
But little does he know
He's the one who's
Ripping as he goes
He runs and yells
He's out of his mind
He's got us scared
All of the time
He looks me in the eyes
And screams in my face
He scared me to death
But you'll never find a trace
I've got to stay strong
To keep him away
I've got to be tough
Or he'll ruin our day
He needs help
But he doesn't let anyone know
We're the only ones there
When he lets his true self show
His eyes red as
Marbles of hatred
Stare right into me
On the inside I'm shaking
But on the outside I'm carefree
He's go to realize
He can't do this anymore
He's go see what he's doing
And show him self the door
This is crazy
No one needs a guy like him
With every moment she spends with him
Her futures looking grim
There's no justice in hitting a girl
There's no justice in raping
God, If she's pregnant
He's mine for the taking..
A contest entry
- Crazyness, Life, Drugs, Depression, ect... by EmmaDilemma93.
500 points, ended April 9, 2007, 22 entries
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Comments
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This seems to be in the 3rd person point of view perhaps to a friend or family member? and if so I can relate to this with alot of people who take the abuse...I myself took it...and I can understand your wanting to save that person...great work...keep writting your very talented
~Chrissy~ -
very well written. I really like this poem. thanks for entering the contest and good luck.
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good write
thanks for entering my contests good luck



