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Believe Me

Believe me.
          I hate you!

Believe me.
          Its true!

You kill me slowly
and don't even care.
So much you said
I now wonder
if any of it was
    true.

A broken heart
is
    u
  s
    e
  l
    e
  s
    s

but one that isn't there?

R U N A W A Y
  like
a child
because love isn't fair.
leaving only a hollow

  S        P

  A        C
        E

only to be filled with air.

Yet part of me is missing
part of me is gone.
To much in love with you
that its hiding
to be near you now.

So believe me
              I hate you!

Believe me
            its true!

But I still
FULLY
love you.

Believe me
            Thats true too!

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  • Aurielle
    March 30, 2007

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    In line eight their is something wrong with the grammar

    I don't know i didn't follow the flow i think u should rereadthis poem again as well asthe word spacein a circle its not spealing correctling how it is formatted

  • dark angel7
    March 29, 2007

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    Wow its sweet simple and to the point. I think what kept my attention was the use of different typing styles. That is a neat idea!