My mind fades slowly to peace
All sound and motion starts to cease
With it breathing shallows an open mind
Wander inside what will you find
Don't be afraid, my mind wont bite
In fact you may find an interesting sight
Of peace and darkness, entwined as one
Of light and war, the evil is done
My mind a labryinth where I shall choose
Who shall win, and who shall lose
The vital flaw of this sick game
Illness reaps, the voice a name
My mind insane with wishful cries
Your mind is lost, your body lies
Says I'm fine when really im not
You walk away and just forgot
That I even exist, I even live
Do I have the strength in me to forgive?
I know I must, be strong for you
For I need you as you need me
Can't we see, what we must do
Work together and soon we'll be free
If we work together we will be strong
We fight the darkness defeat the wrong
In the fantasy we live the demons die
The light prevails and we shall cry
The price of peace seems to high
The cost of loved ones set on sky
Our relatives, our blood is all we lost
But friendship prevails over winters frost
Together we stand side by side
With Sollari with us, the demons hide
Blade in my hand, bow in her grip
We help each other, the darkness will slip
To the power of the elves, the power of trust
The power of Lieoni the guiding thrust
Into the dangers the strength my right
The humans strength the speed of might
As warriors we stand together we see
The broken land we fought to free
The darkness fades across the land
Magic by force, blade by my hand
The arrows of rightous fall down great
The battle ahead will seal the fate
Of our three kingdoms our dormain
The fantasy life, where we remain
Together we stand side by side
With Sollari with us, the demons hide
Blade my hand, bow in her grip
We help each other, the darkness will slip
The trio of races unite as one
Together we fight the war is won
My blade is bloodied, my shield shattered
You lifes are free, my life is battered
The wound I took, no magic can heal
The wound too deep the power cant seal
The fading light I pass a smile
Towards kelborn and sollari while
Elioni by my side, her wings spread high
I gaze up at her, she starts to cry
"forbid those tears my beautiful friend
For it is now my time will end"
You served me well when I had need
You helped me most and now I'm freed
From this land to the Gods above
I'll watch the lands, with trust and love
To ensure your safe, to guide you through
My final breath I call to you
Kelborn I'm sorry that this is how
I will fade, my time is now
Sollari don't cry, my friend
For I'll be with you and I will send
A guide to you when your in need
To both of you I will feed
The strength of me which I draw breath
To your souls, past my death
Brothers and sister in arms we are
Although I'm gone, but your not far
For both dont weep, for we'll shall meet soon
Author notes
This is written about Clair Aradon the character I'm currently playing in a role play me, kelbornro and Faithless Angel are playing out at the mo in our minds over msn. this is how i can picture my character death being like as mad as it seems, i do hope you have enjoyed reading it, as much as im having fun acting it and writing this lol
PLEASE NOTE ALL OF THE POEMS ON THE ROLE PLAY ARE COPYRIGHTED BY ME KELBORNRO AND FAITHLESS ANGEL so please those of you who write storys DO NOT use these poems to create a story
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900 points, ended April 13, 2007, 58 entries
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I like how this has a hero figure and shows bravery and strength. It's like a myth or legend or something. Nice job.
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I liked the break in the rhyme scheme at the end of this, though it does need going over for simple grammar and punctuation as it really could do with it in places. I liked the concept of this, and though it places the language was a bit awkward, it was overall well executed. Thankyou for entering
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Its the R.P that you, Kerri and Jonathan did. It is really well written.
The rhyming like always is great!
Another great write!!
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hehe, thanks
were having a lot of fun with this r.p. You will need to read the other poems on the roleplay to find out who Elioni is though, im glad you liked it though
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wow im gonna have to work this into the story ending, i love the rhyme and the flow and the wording perfection i like the surname to but you might want to make it sound more human.
keep writing and i will read
kelbornro
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hehe yay!
i never thought about putting the r.p. into a poem.
a really good idea, and well written.
i can see it all like in the rp.
hehe yay loves it, cant wait to see kelbornro's reaction.
take care brother
faithless
xxxxxxx
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