What do you see?
When you look into that mirror?
A monster? A mess? Or a misery?
And what do you do,
After you look?
No matter how painful or harsh.
How do you feel,
After whats done?
Disgraced. Self concious. Alone?
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But you see, the facts are these...
No matter what "you" see...
"I'll always see an angel, to beautiful to behold by man"
No matter what "you" do...
"I'll always do my best to help, and see you through the maddness"
And no matter how "you" feel...
Know that youre friends are always here, and'll never judge you for the bad"
'Cause thats what true friends are for...
and you have one right here.'
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Author notes
youre freinds are always here for you in your time of need, therefor im always here for ya ^_-
A contest entry
- 0 by Lauren Noir.
850 points, ended June 2, 2007, 27 entries
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Wow I love it baby.
It the first I have red of urs tht isn't dark,lol but I still like it lol.
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Wow
this is amazing I really like this it made me smile
this is very up lifting , wondering so much emotion and about love and friendship make a friend smile is the best. I really enjoyed this hope to see more soon good job my favorite lines were "No matter what "you" see...
"I'll always see an angel, to beautiful to behold by man"
No matter what "you" do...
"I'll always do my best to help, and see you through the maddness"
And no matter how "you" feel...
Know that youre friends are always here, and'll never judge you for the bad"
'Cause thats what true friends are for...
and you have one right here.'" That's beautiful
keep writting 
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I phink I love you :p
This is wonderful!
This was so uplifting, it just took me soaring straight up with beautiful words
It was cleverly crafted and oh-so-clever
I just love it, it is so special to me
I thank you from the bottom of my heart
*heart*
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It us so good to have these kind of true friends, but many are very shallow, back stabbers that are there for you one day, and not the next; that spread gosssip and tell secrets. Know that from my granddaughters and their teen age friends. Girls are terrible that way. Sentiments well expressed in these lines - easy to read and understand.
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Outstanding
This is so beautiful. The best part of it is that you
know the true definition of what a friend is. This fact is lost on so many. You are ahead of your game.
I wish you success with this contest. I'd vote for this one.
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I luff, you yourself have a unique style, though this piece makes me think of something similar I have written in the beginning...I love how you emphasize "you".. Going from yourself seeing your own monsters and vices, to laying your loyalty on the line even despite how you see yourself, you're not without redemption...
again..I luff.
Sel~
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Words of truth are spoken here. This is such a beautiful piece. I love the chosen vocabulary as welll as the style and layout of the piece. Eveything works well together. Always take care of your friends. They are our only true treasure. Good luck in the contest.
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I Like It!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This speaks truth in volumes!!!You must be a true friend to your friends!! I like the way you posed your questions and then answered them as only a true friend could or would. A friend for all times doesn't judge and is always there for support even when wrong choices may be made. A true friend willbe there to help you pick up the pieces and move on ....I would love to have more friends just like you!!!!Thanks for sharing@!!!~~Toni~~
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great job
This is really good and it's awesome to have really good friends who are there for u. Great job! -
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its true, having really good mates is the best!!!
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yep yep, knowing you have friends to count on is a great feeling other than love.
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