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Paths

You choose your path
you choose your life
the decisions you make
can cause you strife

But dont let people change you
just let them care
Do what you want
dont be afraid to dare

A contest entry

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  • duana
    July 22, 2007

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    hi- yes i agree- compared to your other poetry this is your worst- you didn't put any effort into really making this a poem.


  • knitonepearlone
    July 18, 2007
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    This is great. Short but full of wisdom. Thanks for entering.


  • Amaranth Dihdzere
    March 30, 2007

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    short but shows alot of meaning in its words,i enjoyed this a 100% and looking forward to more of your poetry.
    SEE NO EVIL,HEAR NO EVIL,SPEAK NO EVIL.