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You're the one who pays

Prescence fades away
of nothing I am certain
anymore with lies
facing the final curtain.
I am well overdue
the way you had foreseen us
was so missconstrued
no longer overwhelmed by this.
You will not fulfill yourself
and cry then for your loss
the choices made indefinately
produced the highest cost
and once in time you'll see
that time has slipped away
another moment lost and
you are the one who pays.

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  • PhoenixS-Dragon
    December 9, 2007
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    Awesom

    I'm bad at keeping up but just decided to have a read. Awesome


  • haunted blood
    March 30, 2007

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    hun this is fantastic. i haven't read any of your poems for a while but this is truely great!! love it xxx